Hey Bart nice track, like the laid back meloncholic Floyd feel. I must admit I haven't read Stav's article unless it's the one about to get a dynamic sound the actual composition has to be dynamic, now come to think of it, it has to be that one.
The only thing I can suggest and this is a personal thing the cymbals seem to be a bit bright but as I say a personal thing.
I would also like to say, yes I got the two Ravi's mixed up!!!.
Good work Bart
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