Hey Bart nice track, like the laid back meloncholic Floyd feel.  I must admit I haven't read Stav's article unless it's the one about to get a dynamic sound the actual composition has to be dynamic, now come to think of it, it has to be that one.

 

The only thing I can suggest and this is a personal thing the cymbals seem to be a bit bright but as I say a personal thing.

 

I would also like to say, yes I got the two Ravi's mixed up!!!.

 

Good work Bart

 

Peace Ben

Thanks Ben

Much appreciated.

I agree with what you say regarding the cymbals too! In fact the drums are a little to out there and could be pulled back to allow other parts to sit in the sun a little more per the article! Worth reading!

This was done after Stav answered my 3db question in ask Stav which touched upon the recent AT article.